tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post7464548555724631455..comments2023-05-02T05:15:58.007-04:00Comments on Surprise Package : Daniel and Adrienne #1 : And you shall receiveladiosabrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04354226145006139165noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post-39183176575353903992012-12-29T03:27:37.339-05:002012-12-29T03:27:37.339-05:00I like this one even more now. A lot of your descr...I like this one even more now. A lot of your descriptions are really vivid. Great job! :)Chrysaleigh Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903347911207262112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post-12033061510894404662012-12-28T00:39:16.458-05:002012-12-28T00:39:16.458-05:00This is excellent--it's got the feel of a &quo...This is excellent--it's got the feel of a "real" episode. I can definitely see this being turned into a series of fan films or something--great work!Justin Foleyhttp://www.justinfoley.canoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post-36749310163710430382012-10-14T12:38:23.841-04:002012-10-14T12:38:23.841-04:00I love the interaction between the two of them. I...I love the interaction between the two of them. I hate that she has to work so hard to prove herself to Daniel but I can understand that he is feeling threatened and is used to things being a certain way. Change is hard. Love the story Love the characters. Addy is full of life and spunk.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12824992866503219940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post-50992292974994949642012-09-03T14:57:05.057-04:002012-09-03T14:57:05.057-04:00I had to check out the first chapter. Very nice, l...I had to check out the first chapter. Very nice, looking forward to reading more. Adrienne is very feisty! Also glad Jack & Sam are together. :)Donna Grout https://www.blogger.com/profile/17835239642612568454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post-48050277076055473842012-08-13T06:23:30.419-04:002012-08-13T06:23:30.419-04:00Great stuff. Much better :)Great stuff. Much better :)Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15285632190480221634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6114975476764169773.post-65553534015799899802012-06-15T00:28:57.866-04:002012-06-15T00:28:57.866-04:00bubble tea is miss Awesome ! BREF ! I finally fini...bubble tea is miss Awesome ! BREF ! I finally finished this firt chapter and... LOVE IT! try to read one every night! :D<br /><br />and Holly **** can't wait for extra part of this story ! :D<br /><br />you're such a good writer ! Bravo !Bubble-teahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00454249892401987131noreply@blogger.com